Sun and Moon_Ch1_Pg7

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Note: Please read from Right to left, japan manga style. ^^


Hee hee...^^' Did I forget to mention this story involves children? *quickly takes cover behind the one shield impenetrable to all fangirls and boys...Uchiha Itachi*

Don't kill me! O_O I know there a ton of doujinshi where Naruto has a child or two. But my doujinshi hopefully has an explanation that works with the Naruto universe, on top of revolving entirely around the fact that Naruto HAS KIDS. ^^


^^ I love Chiori and Kisuna. Probably Chiori the most. He's lots of fun, as you'll all soon see.



Things I like:

- Chiori and Kisuna. They came out just like I imagined. ^^ I've drawn Kisuna before (called her Kitsuna back then), but I've edited her a little. Chiori is completely knew, born into the universe in my mind only about four months ago. ^^
- Shizune's expressions. I love the look on her face in the middle panel. XD
- Gaara is so going to kill them all. XD

Things I don't like:

-profiles. Still need to work on them. XD